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Literacy, posts and replies.
« Thread Started on Jul 26, 2007, 3:32pm »

Okay, to make this very clear how literate you must be, I will post how your first post in a thread should look, and each of your replies.

First Posts
This applies weither or not you make the thread!
Example:

The first Paraghraph must tell why or how the person got here.

Lorelei smiled as she walked into the dorm building, looking around seeing all the different faces, happy and sad, not to mention angry. She walked down the hall, 120, 121, 122, 123, 124. "Here we are!" She took her room key out of her white Chanel bag.

The Second Paraghraph can be short, it tends to be, in rare cases this may be the last in a first post. It describes what you are wearing, your apperance, and such.

She turned the key and walked into the room. Walls white, pretty plain, huge, but plain. She set down her bags and smoothed down her dark denium mini, it went perfectly with her strapless whote tank top, she got while in Paris.

The third is almost always the last of a first post, The interaction paraghraph, some say.

Lorelei suddenly noticed the petite girl standing beside one of the beds. Was this a double? The girl was short, dressed in black baging clothing. "Hello, I'm Lorelei Rogers, you?" She wasn't sure entirly how friendly this girl would be.

Done, you see? This took me a total of two minutes, really isn't that hard!

Replies
I will let up when it comes to replies, though I hate one-lines, in rar cases it's hard to avoid them.

Vanessa stared at this bubbley, tall, beautiful teenager, rich she was sure. She had knew she'd have a roomie, but she hoped that it would be like, not her. She looked like a cheer leading Popular, snob. "Vanessa" she said flatly. Once she felt she had said enough, she turned and continued to unpack, not interested in her roomie.

One minute tops! This is what I expect from you all!

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